The Official Writing Challenge
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02/18/10
This was interesting, but the many "Phew's" were a little distracting.
I liked how you drew from personal experiences when using the topic word however I think "maybe" only using 1 or 2 and putting in more detail about each would not feel like jumping around so much.
02/19/10
You have some great ideas here on resignation and relief. Sometimes, just focusing on one or two concepts makes a more concise, easier to read piece.