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02/18/10
A very exciting story. Oh my, God was so good to awaken you so that you were able to absorb, and take care of the situation! A nice job of writing this article.
02/19/10
Totally enjoyed this! I was in alarm with you!!

Oh, and I could see Devyn's little grin, perfectly!
02/19/10
Excellent story about a little boy's curiosity and the patience of a grandparent. It takes a lot to make people gasp and giggle all in the same several paragraphs.
02/20/10
Cute story!
02/21/10
a fascinating story! :-)
02/22/10
What a cute story and a good reminder that you can never take your eye off a 2 yo even when you're sleeping!
02/22/10
A great read! I loved the line about bringing the hose into the house fulfilling a life-long dream.