The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/10
Hehehe. I love the ending!
I imagine that your story is a reality check for a lot of people.
02/13/10
Very interesting account. "And they lived happily ever after?" What is meant to be, will be, if we let loose, and let God!
02/16/10
Got your MrS. degree at a Christian college, huh?

Take a look at the number of sentences that end in exclamation points. I've posted a class on that in the forums (look for 'Jan's Writing Basics' if you're interested).

This is tenderly written and very authentic.
02/18/10
Hey Sarah, congrats on placing 10th in the Level 1 with this entry! There are so many talented writers here, so great job! If you haven't already, be sure to check out the Highest Rankings on the boards:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=28809