The Official Writing Challenge
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Hehehe. I love the ending!
I imagine that your story is a reality check for a lot of people.
Very interesting account. "And they lived happily ever after?" What is meant to be, will be, if we let loose, and let God!
Got your MrS. degree at a Christian college, huh?

Take a look at the number of sentences that end in exclamation points. I've posted a class on that in the forums (look for 'Jan's Writing Basics' if you're interested).

This is tenderly written and very authentic.
Hey Sarah, congrats on placing 10th in the Level 1 with this entry! There are so many talented writers here, so great job! If you haven't already, be sure to check out the Highest Rankings on the boards: