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02/11/10
Great way to look at it!
Like the ingredients on food...Patience is listed first because it's the main ingredient!
02/14/10
Good job!
02/15/10

Great writing and I liked how you segued in the Bible passages and they really do tie into the story smoothly.
02/16/10
A devotional disguised as a story--clever!

I almost think the last few sentences directed at the reader are unnecessary. Trust your own writing and your readers to get the point.

This would be good in a Christian singles' publication.
02/16/10
Smart woman to wait. I wish more would. God loves to remind me of that passage also. Thank you.
02/18/10
Hey Krista, congrats on placing 9th in the Level 1 with this entry! There are so many talented writers here, so great job! If you haven't already, be sure to check out the Highest Rankings on the boards:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=28809