The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting, I like the ending.
02/14/10
I think it is time for the world to slow down, and allow a few people to have their time with God. We have to be satisfied with less, perhaps, and get off the merry-go-round. Most of us have probably been there at some time in our lives!
02/16/10
Very lovely. Perhaps shorter paragraphs for pacing and ease on the readers' eyes, but really...very, very lovely.
02/18/10
Congratulations on your Highly Commended win this week. More importantly, I checked out your profile and was blown away by your storehouse of work...you are truly faithful to your craft!
May God continue to bless the work of your hands.
02/18/10
Yay Pam! Congrats on your placing :-)
02/19/10
I enjoyed this very much. I would never go to work on Monday if I didn't spend time with God first.