The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting, I like the ending.
I think it is time for the world to slow down, and allow a few people to have their time with God. We have to be satisfied with less, perhaps, and get off the merry-go-round. Most of us have probably been there at some time in our lives!
Very lovely. Perhaps shorter paragraphs for pacing and ease on the readers' eyes, but really...very, very lovely.
Congratulations on your Highly Commended win this week. More importantly, I checked out your profile and was blown away by your storehouse of are truly faithful to your craft!
May God continue to bless the work of your hands.
Yay Pam! Congrats on your placing :-)
I enjoyed this very much. I would never go to work on Monday if I didn't spend time with God first.