The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/10
A creative approach to telling this story (and yes, I STILL wanna know what it was!). Got a bit lost in a few places trying to figure out the other side of the conversation. PERFECT title.
02/14/10
This was a very interesting piece, but I too would like to know what "it" was. Good job of describing bureaucracy! Good use of many descriptive words.
02/16/10
This kinda reminds me of a Bob Newhart monologue--he frequently did one-sided phone conversations.

Maybe with some narrative to clarify, it'd be a bit easier to follow.

Fun intrique--an entertaining read.