The Official Writing Challenge
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Ahhh, the "thinkings" of a child! Precious.
This is precious!
Hey, I still wonder where the conversation went?
I think only half of your story came through - unless the "ohh" comes from the reader. Otherwise, well written to where it ends.
Actually, now that I read it again, it's quite funny... cute!
Cute story - I can hear one of my grandkids having this conversation.
That made me laugh! It is much better for God to be in the closet then monsters, that is for sure!
This one made me grin...precious.

In the section of dialog at the end, there should be a blank line after each speaker's bit of conversation, even though they are very short.

I loved your punchline.