The Official Writing Challenge
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A sweet and tender story - told well.
Oh - you brought tears to my eyes with the building of the third snow child. What a great way to lead into the explanation of what happened in her life. This seems like the beginning of a much bigger story. Nicely done!
02/12/10
A very touching story. If it was real,thank God for the way that it turned out. All situations do not have a happy ending. God is so good!
Great story--I too love the early morning time before anyone else is awake--it's when we hear God the best! Lovely tie-in with the snow family--really original.
02/16/10
I love stories where the "locust years" are redeemed.

The dialog seemed a bit stilted in places, and not quite true to the characters' ages.

Wonderful device--the snow child. Very creative.