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02/12/10
Cute story, but I had a little problem with desert, ocean, and Spanish moss. Does this really exist somewhere in the same area?
02/16/10
Very descriptive, to be sure.

There were some elements here that suggested allegory or maybe fantasy? It just didn't entirely pull together for me.

I certainly wanted to know more about the narrator and the sister. You've intrigued me.
02/17/10
Very interesting, but seemed to be telling only a small part of a good story. Love to hear the rest!
02/18/10
Hey Kathleen, congrats on placing 14th in the Level 1 with this entry! There are so many talented writers here, so great job! If you haven't already, be sure to check out the Highest Rankings on the boards:

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