The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute story, but I had a little problem with desert, ocean, and Spanish moss. Does this really exist somewhere in the same area?
Very descriptive, to be sure.

There were some elements here that suggested allegory or maybe fantasy? It just didn't entirely pull together for me.

I certainly wanted to know more about the narrator and the sister. You've intrigued me.
Very interesting, but seemed to be telling only a small part of a good story. Love to hear the rest!
Hey Kathleen, congrats on placing 14th in the Level 1 with this entry! There are so many talented writers here, so great job! If you haven't already, be sure to check out the Highest Rankings on the boards: