The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute and Ohhh so familiar!
I love this - everyone has those "out of the mouth of babes" stories, but this was golden. Your descriptions were excellent - I felt like I was there. Didn't know how you were going to make the topic work, but I think it became self-explanatory at the end. Good Job!
02/12/10

"Out of the mouth of babes!" Very well done article! I'm sure the woman got a real kick out of that question. Kids are so honest in what they say. Sometimes we adults could take a good lesson. if you tell the truth about what you say, you don't have to remember what you said! (At 78 years of age, that is a great statement, as it becomes harder and harder to remember! :) Great job!
Very funny story!
02/16/10
kids do say the darndest things, don't they? precious honesty in this. thanks for sharing.
02/16/10
Hilarious!

Well-written, too. My only suggestion would be to break it into several smaller paragraphs.

I wanted to read more and more! Great buildup to the kicker at the end.
02/17/10
What a surprise twist at the ending. And so typical of how our children say unexpected things. Thanks for a fun read!