The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute story, but I didn't see effective use of the assigned word. Just a thought for the next time. Happy writing.
02/12/10
It was a cute story. I can see "Ohhh!" applied, if it isn't actually stated. I enjoyed the story!
02/16/10
A very squirmy story!

I'm not sure who the intended audience is--it seems to be written for children, but do children want a story about enemas?

Great pun in the title--I always love a good play on words.