The Official Writing Challenge
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02/12/10
Very well written and heart rending. Remain faithful through the hard times. i feel assured that God will open an even better door! Keep holding on to His hand!
02/16/10
What a life-changing event! It takes talent to write a personal story in verse.

A few things to work on: some of your possessives lacked an apostrophe, and the meter could be a tad more regular.

Minor tweaks only--thank you so much for this poem.
02/17/10
I love the picture of a husband and wife together, trusting the Lord through whatever comes their way. A very touching, faith-filled story that reminds us always to hold onto the Lord.
02/17/10
Good job on the poetry, and a wonderful message. Thanks!