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By Linda Smock
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This is a good reminder to be thoughtful of other people's feelings rather than getting angry because things don't go the way we like. There are a few punctuation errors and the quotations might need a little revising in a few places, but the story is awesome. Keep it up!
Try breaking into paragraphs leaving this much space
between Also,in dialogue, each person gets their own line also. You'll get the mechanics, you are a good writer.