The Official Writing Challenge
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02/04/10
Cute, and I've heard that expression many times!!:)
That was great! I hope I'm that cool of a Mom when my kids get big enough to drop cars in holes.
02/05/10
This was fun. I love the companionship the story made real- and I loved the familial bond that had Dad come by at the exact moment of need. You had me peering over into the hole to check out possible dangers. Well done.
02/06/10
I understand this story as I was probably the one without a lick of sense.

Maybe it's when you have boys. Good story
02/09/10
I really "liked the feel" of this story, "talking heads" phrase is great!
02/12/10
Ahhh I love Marilyn! What a hero even if she did get herself in a bit of predicament.