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I can relate to this piece. It sounds just like my house!
02/04/10
Nawww...I really like this! I like your strong verbs and your peak into the the mind of this woman. :) The ending? Perfect. :)
02/04/10
This is a wonderful article, and written so well. I'm sure many of us will relate!Why can't we just accept the way things are sometimes. Thank God for the perks!!! You did a great job!
02/04/10
This is a wonderful article, and written so well. I'm sure many of us will relate!Why can't we just accept the way things are sometimes. Thank God for the perks!!! You did a great job!
02/07/10
Such good stuff in this short piece. Perfect ending.
02/08/10
Awww, such a sweet husband! :) I know I certainly grumble like the main character at times, wondering why I have to be one of the only ones to clean up around the house. . . but then sometimes, it just takes a small gesture of love to remind me that I really am blessed with a great family.

Thanks for sharing this story! The title is great for this piece.
02/11/10
You related so well how one little magic moment can change our whole outlook. Thank you.
02/11/10
Hey Shannon, congrats on placing 13th in Level 1 with your entry! You are among some great writers, so good job! If you haven't already, be sure to check out the Highest Rankings posted on the forums:

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