The Official Writing Challenge
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I like how you showed just a bit of the MC's true feelings, but kept up the grumpy side too. Cute story!
You painted a great portrait of a grumpy, lonely, sad, old man. Good job. My heart ached for him.
02/07/10
I think I know that old fellow. Great voice, and character study.
02/08/10
I thought you did a great job of introducing this grumpy MC as the story unfolded.
02/11/10
Congrats on your placing! Great job!