The Official Writing Challenge
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02/04/10
This was terrific, from beginning to end! Great description, lots of detail, and good use of third person. I felt "in the moment" with this super mom. What a fun birthday story to pass on through the years. Good job!
I was tickled reading this and pictured the little wind up bunny that keeps going and going!
What a delightful story, and now I know not to substitute powdered sugar while baking a cake!
02/07/10
Clever little story.I liked hearing the mother's thoughts.
02/09/10
I enjoyed your story. We moms like everything to be just so and will do anything to make it happen.
02/11/10
Hey Marie, congrats on placing 12th in Level 1 with your entry! You are among some great writers, so good job! If you haven't already, be sure to check out the Highest Rankings posted on the forums:

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