The Official Writing Challenge
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02/04/10
Creative article!
Well, I have a heart for Soldiers and love critters so you captured my attention all the way around! I even felt bad for lulu being gone but so glad you have another commrade.
02/07/10
Wow, you can write. Just one hint, put space between paragraphs. That would make it easier to read. You wove a good tale. Blessings,Ruth
I love this!! Have gotten in trouble with our garbagemen for throwing away paint cans too!!! What a nice tie-in with Sunshine--really cute story.
02/10/10
Beautiful flow! I like how you give the paint cans a life of their own. I also love the theme of taking something that's unwanted and making it into something beautiful. Very poetic writing!