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02/04/10
This was a very cute poem, and a great use of the challenge word. Good job
02/04/10
Very nice work. I think it should have been devil's lies, but no big deal...this is a solid entry and a fun read.
A very charming poem.
Im a sucker for bear stories, and I loved the way you tied it in with the spiritual side.
02/07/10
Good title. I liked your poem.
I don't think I have that gift,but you do! Blessings
02/08/10
It's so important to protect children from nasty images when they are young and impressionable! And it's equally important for us to protect our own eyes from the yucky things of this world and the devil's lies. Wonderful poem! Solid truth.
02/11/10
Hey Brian, congrats on placing 14th in Level 1 with your entry! You are among some great writers, so good job! If you haven't already, be sure to check out the Highest Rankings posted on the forums:

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