The Official Writing Challenge
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I can so relate to your fruuuuustration :)
It was a clever story. I'm sure more than one wife would like to use a blowtorch to set a fire under her husband!
01/31/10
This was a good take on the subject. Good characterizations, too. I liked the wife's spunk!
02/01/10
Great dialog writing and pacing.

It's probably just me, but I wasn't comfortable with her methods. It's definitely funny, though!

You're a talented writer, to be sure.
02/01/10
Funny! You did a very good job with this piece (although in my family, we never use that particular word ;-) Looking forward to more of your writing!
Good for her, finally getting Matt's attention. What a shame it took the threat of a blow-torch to his beloved car for him to notice her. Glad she didn't really start the fire. Great dialogue. Nice job with this!
02/01/10
What a great story! I loved seeing what was around every corner! Your ending was perfect! :)
02/02/10
Great title. How many other wives try this during football season and Nascar races? Cute story.
Good story. Very cleverly done.
02/03/10
Creative article!
02/03/10
My favorite line was about shoving the remote up his nose. I really got a visual on that one.
02/04/10
Congrats on your placing Kristi!