The Official Writing Challenge
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Great work here! I loved this piece.
02/01/10
You have a delightful voice--witty and easy-going.

I'd recommend that you eliminate the material at the beginning and the end that references the topic or the assignment and just tell your story. (And by eliminating those, you'll have more words to develop your characters, show some action, etc.)

Lots of potential here.
I, too, love the dictionary, next to the Bible it is my favorite book. It's nice when we can be right! Sometimes, it seems difficult to do with kids.
02/02/10
A good take on Huh?
02/03/10
Very well written! I expect you'll be "moving up" soon!