The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/10
Wonderful message and touching tribute! I can just hear this "tale" being told to the son sitting on her lap. Nice.
02/01/10
Well-done poem and fitting tribute to a Bible-telling mother.

Some of the phrases and word constructions seemed a bit rough or contrived to me. Could be smoothed out a bit, perhaps?

Loved the last stanza, with the legacy being passed on to the next generation.
A thoughtful and loving tribute to your mother.
02/02/10
I too liked the last few stanzas best. I loved the title, what a challenge God gives to every mother.
02/04/10
The highest rankings were just posted on the forums, congrats on placing 10th in Level 1! Awesome job, you can view the rankings here:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=28619
Wow! Whew! Thanks!