The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a bit challenging for me to follow, however, I was very touched by the essence of your story.
02/01/10
I wanted to just tell her to be QUIET. Glad she got the message at the end.
I'm glad the husband finally got to say something. I often do this to my husband. We both thank you for the gentle reminder.
02/03/10
What a patient husband. He needed to tell her sooner, if he could just find an opening.
02/03/10
A good reminder to us to be quiet and listen! Thanks.
02/04/10
Nice eye opener...We often think we are not not getting needed attention. We may have blinders on, heart and ears closed to truth....
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