The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the way this was written...nice humourous conversational flow - easy to read and fun to enjoy...not to mention a tad embarrasing, but hey. I enjoyed this...
01/28/10
A well told account of teachable moments in a family. It would be fun to be around when your daughter has her lightbulb moment in the future about it all.
That was a great story. I had a very similar incident with my daughter. I appreciate the humor and the fun way you told the story. Kids will say the darnedest things!
02/01/10
Love these funny family moments!

I'd leave off the disclaimer at the beginning--you don't want to start off you story with an apology for it, and it's best not to refer to the prompt. Just tell your story!
02/02/10
Gotta love the voice of babes!
LOL what a great HUH? moment. Incidents like that are enough to make a Mom swallow her tongue. With kids, life is full of moments like that. Nothing wrong with your content, just full of childhood innocence.