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What a lovely way to remember someone with Alzheimer's. Ian's comment about holding on to Jesus tugged at my heartstrings.
02/01/10
Wonderfully compassionate toward Ian and other Alzheimer's patients.

This felt a bit disjointed at times--I frequently had to double back and re-read to be sure of what was going on.

The last paragraphs were particularly inspiring and tender.
02/02/10
An interesting look inside this awful disease.
Thank you for such a beautiful story about such a horrible disease.
02/03/10
I believe you may have a winning article! You have my applause and the touching story won my heart!