The Official Writing Challenge
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Charming story, at first I wasn't sure if the stranger was going to be a bad man or something else. Then when I read the reference to the angel book, I was pretty sure he was an angel, but I still felt the suspense until the end.
Charming, sweet children's story.

A small continuity error: you made the "man" to be their neighbor, but then his true identity is revealed and they never see him again. That might need to be tweaked a bit.

Any story with a little girl and a kitten is sure to touch my heart!
Sweet sweet story, keep writing.
This was a vry sweet story.