The Official Writing Challenge
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01/28/10
Oh, that's good! I could identify with the action in the story because I have sons that really get into their video gaming with great intensity. "Ouch!" would also be a good title for this one!
Wonderful message. A wake-up call! May God find me (and my young ones) faithful and obedient to His voice daily. Thanks for your entry.
Blessings to many more writing endeavors for His glory!
You did a wonderful job. Thank you for your insight and gentle reminder that God should come first.
02/01/10
Excellent object lesson!

A small detail: A 'beacon' is a warning light. I think you wanted 'beckon'--to call out to.

This would be a great conversation starter for a teen group.
02/01/10
I liked the scene you set here, felt like I was reading a script from a movie. Good lesson for all of us.
Oh, this is so relateable for all of us. Whether it's a video game, television, Facebook, grin, or some other distraction, most of us have found ourselves so absorbed that we miss out on time with our "Father."
I can see this as a skit or reworked into a devotion. Great message.
02/02/10
Excellent point. Well done.
02/04/10
Valuable lesson! Loved the comment about Charlie Brown!