The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! What an amazing story of what Heaven might be like! Of course, none of us will ever know until we get there, but just like John, I believe that we'll be pleasantly surprised and that everything will be perfect beyond our dreams. Beautiful writing!
A beautiful story.Very thoughtful,Oh what a day that wwill be. My only thought would be break it down into smaller paragraphs to make it easier to read.Keep up the great work.
What a glorious day that will be!

My only thought is that this seems a bit light on the topic of "oops".

Thanks for this glimpse of heaven!
Hi Cindy,
you have such a good eye for detail and can express it on the page - two great assets -
I 'm glad you joined Faithwriters and can see that you have what it takes -