The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a very exciting and gripping account of one of the most challenging things in life. Why don't we ever want to let go? Very well written!
I really liked your story. The title did not catch me though, nor the last few sentences but up until "a reminder to trust in God," you had me. I thought you did an excellent job, had me hanging on.
I enjoyed this from beginning to end. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.
Very entertaining!

I've started a thread in the message boards specifically for Beginner and Intermediate writers, and I'd love to have you stop by.

This story was action-packed and gripping, with just the right touch of humor.
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