The Official Writing Challenge
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What a wonderful reminder that our children are sponges and soak up everything we say. This is a refreshing story that will be retold to your great grandchildren and their children. We can learn much from our little ones.
Shann
01/25/10
Excellent story for "Oops!" I enjoyed this.

I'd suggest opening with a stronger hook, but otherwise, this was a delightful read.

I've started a thread in the message boards specifically for Beginner and Intermediate writers, and I'd love to have you stop by. http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=67

I really liked your title, and your precious 2-year-old.
01/28/10
First of all, congrats on getting "Highly Commended" (4th place) in level 1!

And second...

M-I-Z.... Z-O-U!

From one Mizzou fan to another... Go Tigers! And I guess I love those Jayhaks too.... or at least like them. ;)
A great story and lesson. Well done and congratulations.
01/29/10
Oh, out of the mouth of babes--and a great message and lesson is learned. Good story.
02/08/10
This was such a good story. Congrats on your highly recommended!