The Official Writing Challenge
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01/21/10
The horrors of GPS...lol. I think most of us have a story or two about that dreaded...helpful gadget? Good story and message. Thanks for sharing!
01/25/10
I grinned all the way through this; big city driving terrifies me, and I too have had GPS issues.

There were times when you switched tenses--from past to present and back.

I've started a thread in the message boards specifically for Beginner and Intermediate writers, and I'd love to have you stop by. http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=67

I really enjoyed this, and the spiritual application at the end was perfect.
01/29/10
Congrats on placing 9th in Level 1 with your entry! You can check out the highest rankings each week on the forums: http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=28510