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A lovely story, and with a dramatic and unexpected twist at the end. It's a shame that they grew apart. I especially like the closeness of their relationship at the beginning of the story.
A lovely progression in this story. I'm glad it turned out well at the end.
I like the play on words with Grace at the end. It was a very touching and heartfelt story.
This has a lyrical feel to it--quite beautiful.
This was a lovely heartwarming story of the mother-daughter relationship and good use of topic.
Check for some mispellings like quite should be quiet, chocked->choked, barley->
A real charmer, this sweet little story. Loved the way you aged Grace and I loved the ending. Patty
Liked the progression of your story--and the teen years were presented in a realistic way. So glad it all ended on a happy note. I suspect you'll be moving to the next level soon.