The Official Writing Challenge
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01/21/10
Yes, wisdom is indeed worth what it costs. Good message in here, and nice, easy flow in reading. Thanks for sharing this!
I'VE ALWAYS GOTTEN A WONDERFUL FEELING WHEN I HELP OTHERS. I REALIZED IF I WANT MY FAMILY AND FRIENDS TO SHARE IN THIS GOOD FEELING, I MUST AT TIMES BE ON THE RECEIVING END, OTHERWISE I'M DENYING OTHERS the opportunity to have that feel good feeling. (Please know I wasn't yelling I just didn't realize my caps locked was on, oops! plus I'm too lazy to retype) Thank you for the great story.
01/25/10
Well done--I feel as if I know you after reading this.

A few suggestions: I'd like more details about the "oops" moment, and it's best to avoid exclamation points in narrative.

I've started a thread in the message boards specifically for Beginner and Intermediate writers, and I'd love to have you stop by. http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=67

Your writing it very good, and I look forward to reading more in the coming weeks.