The Official Writing Challenge
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01/21/10
Sounds like a winner to me.
01/21/10
Excellent piece! This was very well written and easy to read. I loved the ending, too.
01/22/10
Excellent story! Very good writing. You held my attention from start to finish. Great lesson as well.
01/23/10
Incredible story-line! You are...."Going Up"....Keep writing.
01/23/10
Very good story. Your writing enabled me to feel like I was actually there. You held my interest all the way and I loved the ending.
I loved your story. I do believe God calls on us to pray for others. You brought out the fact when we listen to God, good things are bound to happen. Great job!
Absolutely heartwarming!
01/25/10
I write this with tears in my eyes and a runny nose. Your article hit a wonderful spot in my heart. You did a bang up job. Keep it up.
01/25/10
Well done! I saw the ending coming, but that didn't stop me from reading and enjoying the whole ride.
01/25/10
Wow! What a great story! Kept me engaged all the way to the end, especially when praying for a total stranger was mentioned. I've been in that position before, and it's quite exciting when you see God answer those prayers! Fantastic piece of writing!
Excellent writing and engaging story. I loved the elevator opening at every floor. Creative! This one's a winner in my book.
Whoa! Talk about the power of prayer.:0) Beauiful piece, grabs the attention of the reader and just flows. The dialogue is right on and the ending is perfect. You won't stay in beginners long with this kind of work!
God sure doesn't make any oops in our lives and there is no coincidence with Him. He opens doors for us if we just trust Him and are obedient. Bravo.:0) God bless your writing.
You WILL indeed be moving up! You're writing is a delight and makes me want to read a book of the story developed from this?
01/27/10
I was engaged in this from the first sentence. I did assume that Martha knew Mr. Trenton personally, but did not expect her to be his mother. Very, very good. Loved the happy ending and the way you showed how God works in us and through us.
01/28/10
Very good indeed. A little predictable but not enough to lose interest.
Strong characters. Love it. Congrats on EC.
Mona
01/28/10
Loved this story Lisa, creative, fun AND deep. Well done on another EC!
Excellent story, and the oops turned out to be a good one. Conratulations on your EC!
01/28/10
Very engaging conversational approach. This girl sure knew how to preprayer herself for the interview. Excellent work.
For sure, your writing position will soon be on a higher floor. Cute twist. Congrats on the win. Patty
02/06/10
What a well-written, wonderfully inspiring piece. I loved it all the way through. You are blessed with a gift from God. Keep writing; I look forward to seeing more of your work.
04/25/10
I cried large tears of JOY. You truly expressed the way our LORD works.