The Official Writing Challenge
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01/21/10
Wonderful poem here and such deep thoughts. Yes, I certainly hope that when life is over, God will not look at me and say "oops" Great poetry, and great expression of a deep thought
01/21/10
This is pretty well done, a little awkward in a few places, a typo/missing comma, but the rhythm for reading and the syllables are well chosen. I enjoyed the read, it flowed well and there was a good message. What a way to think of "Oops" nice job!
01/21/10
Oh so well said. Keep up the good work. Blessings,Ruth
I love poetry anyways and this one was well written.I like the voice and your message is one that we can all reflect on. Nicely put. For the most part the meter and rhythm are right on, only in a couple of places they could be touched up to just a tad more. But all in all this is very good.:0) Keep on writing. God bless your day.:)))
01/23/10
I enjoyed your poem. A nice reminder that all we do should bring Him honor. God Bless.
01/25/10
Good message in this light and charming poem.
I liked how you chose your words to compose this poem. The flow and rhythm was easy read and smooth. Keep it up.
Keep writing for Jesus, our Lord.
Grace, peace and rest in the "daily grind of life"
God is faithful and trustworthy,
Maryknoll