The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/10
Interesting accounts of God's help in adversity. Lots of Christians have been woken in the night to pray - thanks for reminding us in this meaningful story.
Colin
01/17/10
Prayer is a powerful thing! In trouble and in good times, the very best thing for us to do is cry out to the Lord. Love how you tied these accounts together! Great job.
01/18/10
Gripping stories!

I've started a class in the FaithWriters forums for Beginner and Intermediate writers. I'd love to see you there--look for "Jan's Writing Basics".

Your writing really drew me in.
I really like your last line. it is an excellent metaphor for life in general. We can spend all of our time lamenting the ows in our life or praise God for the miraculous way he changes an ow into a wow.

This is excellent and I'd love to see it in a devotion book. You might have to tighten the word count a bit (most like under 300 words) but I'm sure you could find a Bible reading and add a prayer. It is a lesson so many people need to hear. Outstanding job.