The Official Writing Challenge
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really enjoyed the poem
08/23/05
What a lovely poem, filled with so many encouraging thoughts! You wrote a beautiful piece of poetry here. "God Bless You"
This is such a well written poem! Not only well done but has an understanding of the Word and the human experience. In my humble opinion it could stand by itself without the last three paragraphs. While there is nothing wrong with your comments at all, I lost sight of this beautiful poem after continuing to read. God Bless You.
08/30/05
A wonderful poem! But the prose at the end kind of detracted from it a bit. I might have put it at the beginning, or left it out.