The Official Writing Challenge
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what an interesting way of writing about our way of holding on to our rags when the king has offered us pure luxury. GREAT STORY!!!!! I enjoyed it.
Very descriptive! I was drawn to the title, wondering who or what the lily was. I was not disappointed! Excellent telling!
Great from the beginning to the end and everything in between.
A creative piece of writing and well crafted. I too decided to read it because of the title and I wasn't disappointed. Keep writing!
Wow! I will not forget this story anytime soon. The message is powerful, thanks for sharing.
I really liked this - very good story.
I liked the decriptiveness of your tale. I keep seeing that bubble bath and wonder how could any woman walk from that? Good story! Blessings!
Hey Lady, great writing I was able to walk with her.The entire story became a visual.So many are people God has prepared for that refuse His call. Loved it Terry