The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/10
Thanks for your story about a lost love and the cat. Trusting God in it all is always a purr-fect ending Ow! I agree, a cat does mouth Ow! Colin
01/16/10

This short story was excellent with weaving in the "ow" aspect from a cat and a story about unrequited love and God's strength for the man.

Very enjoyable reading. Nothing that jarred or seemed out of place, at least, to me.
01/18/10
Well done--I love cat stories, and you wove Oscar into this story expertly.

I've started a class in the FaithWriters forums for Beginner and Intermediate writers. I'd love to see you there--look for "Jan's Writing Basics".

I love the way it ended--not a neat and tidy wrap-up, but a thoughtful open ending.