The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/10
a creative piece of writing. Try double spacing of paragraphs for more easy reading. Thanks - Colin
This is a very powerful story. I liked your deccription of being young again
01/18/10
This is very creative! I'd love to have seen it expanded.

I've started a class in the FaithWriters forums for Beginner and Intermediate writers. I'd love to see you there--look for "Jan's Writing Basics".

Think about writing this in story form, with paragraphs, dialog, etc. Help us get to know this character better--I was intrigued!
01/23/10
I loved this creative idea. Paragraphs would have been easier to read, but you kept me guessing what would happen until the end. Great stuff.

By the way, Cindy, thanks for commenting on my story, Teapot's First Lesson. Your comments blessed me.
What a great imagination....you go girl!