The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/10
Interesting thoughts and insights in your Ow! story. I think if any one asked me for painkillers when I was a kid I would have thought them mad too - not something kid's carry around usually!

Thanks - Colin
01/17/10
A most thoughtful piece. Many good scriptures. For me though,when I perceive something it is what I see and feel.Keep writing. Blessings, Ruth
01/18/10
Thanks for using a personal anecdote throughout your devotional--that's a really effective way to write.

I did feel that the lesson lacked a bit of focus--needed to be tightened a bit.

I've started a class in the FaithWriters forums for Beginner and Intermediate writers. I'd love to see you there--look for "Jan's Writing Basics".

Hope your "ow" is better!