The Official Writing Challenge
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This story is fantastic, somehow touching. I find it hard to believe that there are places where there is still discrimination against christianity.
I was so engaged in this - and it is so hard to imagine being in a situation of this nature, but I know it happens a lot more than we'd like to admit. You put me right there.
A fascinating look at a culture unfamiliar to most of us.

It will be kinder on your readers' eyes if you put a white space between each paragraph.

I've started a class in the FaithWriters forums for Beginner and Intermediate writers. I'd love to see you there--look for "Jan's Writing Basics".

Keep writing!