The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/10
This would make a good preach as a sermonette. Maybe I'm blind but I couldn't quite find the Ow! topic here. I'm sorry if it's there and I missed it. Colin
01/14/10
I love how you tied in "The Biggest Loser" with the "losing" that Paul talks about. ("The Biggest Loser" would be a good alternate title for this one since everybody seems to love that show. It would really get their attention. ;) ) I almost used those same verses in Philippians in my entry but decided on some different ones instead! Great verses for this topic! I enjoyed reading this entry. Paul is one of my favorite Bible writers! ;)
01/15/10
I am sorry I did not see the Ow! topic here either. Nice writing anyway.
01/18/10
Good devotional--it really preaches!

I thought it'd be really effective to come full circle--to tie in with "The Biggest Loser" again at the end. It was a great hook.

I've started a class in the FaithWriters forums for Beginner and Intermediate writers. I'd love to see you there--look for "Jan's Writing Basics".

Thanks for the time and effort that you obviously put into this scripturally sound piece.