The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this! Very witty. My teen son and I spent days last Christmas in front of the game. Just a thought - for me author notes detract from good writing, no matter how much explaining you do, not everyone will always "get it." Some will get something out of it you hadn't planned, too. You brought life to the characters and wrote well, can't ask for more than that...
12/11/09
This is definitely my favorite so far! I love games, and this is very creative.

I agree with the previous commenter--author's notes are almost always anticlimactic. Trust your own writing--it's very good!
12/12/09
I remembered the characters. You are already a good story teller. Very fun! Happy Christmas.