The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/09
Beautiful prayer at the end of this devotional!

This could be a little bit light on topic--and would be more readable with the longer paragraphs broken into shorter ones.

I'm a people-watcher, too!
12/16/09
Each person is unique. I think you might have been more colorful. Keep writing.