The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/09
I liked this. Our life journey is not always sweet & safe...it has its share of hardships. Good writing & Merry Christmas!
12/11/09
How interesting--never would have thought of this setting!

There were some minor punctuation issues, easily fixed.

Thanks for the hopeful ending.
01/12/10
Very well written and inspiring. This touched my heart.
Ooo, powerful story. I was a little confused in a few places near the beginning, but then you sucked me in. Good job.