The Official Writing Challenge
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It's so interesting to think of how to describe color to someone who's never experienced it!

Some of your dialog seemed a bit stilted, and I really wanted to more fully understand the relationship between your narrator and the blind man. Perhaps less dialog and some passages describing action would take care of both issues?

Your characters both had some interesting observations. Keep up the good work!

It seems unusual a sighted person is able to describe color this way, but nice! Thank you.
You did such a vivid job of describing colors. Your imagination is awesome. I don't think I could ever describe a color in the marvelous way that you did.