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Wow - that was great! Loved the ending. Annie received quite a blessing in spite of what she THOUGHT was going on around her.
Very good and teaches a valuable lesson.
Very touching and good job describing the fire. Felt like I was there. God bless you.
The reader can feel Annie's pain and can understand her anger. We also experience the fire and its after effects. You have told this story well and make the events come alive. Thanks for sharing.
A well-told, powerful story with a great conclusion. Excellent work.