The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/09
Very sweet children's story.

A few things seemed a bit unrealistic to me, but it was fun to meet your charming protagonist.
This was fun to read. Some editing is needed to make it really sparkle but overall, good writing.
12/15/09
I enjoyed this...and can only imagine fun that will result from the friendship of these two girls.