The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/09
This really took me back; I remember those days well. I was especially astonished the first time I saw "The Wizard of Oz" in color, when Dorothy landed in Oz.

My only critique would be that exclamation points should be used rarely, if at all, outside of dialog. Use strong word choices rather than punctuation to convey emotion.

This is very good, and the lesson at the end quite appropriate.
Hey - thanks for the memories. I remember b&w tv moving to colour and how exciting that was. Nice take on the topic.
12/14/09
nice trip down memory lane!